Story of a lost journalist

May 26, 2007

If none could see me…

Filed under: Music,poem — Cris @ 08:04


If none could see me
Or hear what I say
I should do as I please
Jump, laugh or sing loud

I should jump up so high
In every street that is brown
Not scared of an eye
Or faces that frown

I would laugh out so loud
Till my throat should so ache
I would sing out so loud
Till I can a word make

I would walk past them all
Make faces at them
And then tell them all
Am scared of noone

I would play with my dolls
With none to tease me
And take them all malls
without any shame

I would dance in a stage
As much as I want
With all my courage
Till my legs fall apart

If none could see me
Or hear what I say
I should do as I please
Jump, laugh or sing loud

Anywhere, any time
I will give me all joy
Till one day I’ll want
To be seen, to be heard

And then I’ll come back
And talk and smile good
And still do all things
Jump, laugh or sing loud


  1. haha lolz..i can imagine u doin all that….liked the bit where u would walk by ppl and make faces at them

    Comment by justajester — May 26, 2007 @ 11:28 | Reply

  2. Loved it gugu!:)

    Comment by Gov — May 28, 2007 @ 05:08 | Reply

  3. ur second poem, rt?
    good one- nice idea, half- rhymes n all…

    Comment by jest a juster — June 5, 2007 @ 07:12 | Reply

  4. crazy but quite funny!!;-P

    Comment by mathew — June 6, 2007 @ 14:40 | Reply

  5. hmmmm…..lets see here…..aaahhh…..wellll……….yup!
    you are right, the world would be a much better place if no one could see you……..coz death due to heart attack would decline….muhaha!

    Comment by me! — June 7, 2007 @ 19:15 | Reply

  6. loneliness is reflecting in this..

    Comment by Tito George — June 14, 2007 @ 11:44 | Reply

  7. cooll….lol

    Comment by adi — April 4, 2008 @ 03:47 | Reply

  8. Thanks all 🙂
    @me LOL
    @Tito, I did not intend that 😀

    Comment by Cris — June 3, 2008 @ 19:22 | Reply

  9. Nice sharp voice.

    Comment by Gov — June 4, 2008 @ 09:55 | Reply

  10. I have lived the life as in your poem:) , starved without any one seeing, cried without anyone hearing.. I always wished someone around could see me or could hear me.. None did, but but The one did..

    Nice poem.. Why don’t you try one. Now?

    Comment by Javed Miandad — December 28, 2011 @ 02:55 | Reply

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